Thursday, May 16, 2013

Take five


I am Jack. I go to zoo school.
One day I stole the teacher's new saucepan and they caught me and abolished me.
5 months later they wanted me back. 
I got a request.
The next day I went back to school. They had bought a frog while I was gone. When it saw me it hid in the bush.
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  1. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 10:41 AM

    Dear Jack
    I like the way you put I goto zoo scool and how you introduced you name.
    From Connor

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  2. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    Dear Jack
    I like how you used a lot of descript words.When I first read your writing it blew me away .By the what is it like at zoo school?

    Emily

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  3. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 10:47 AM

    Hi Jack
    your stories really great I like how you put alot of really great describing words.
    Real cool from Meadow

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  4. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 10:51 AM

    Hi jack i really like how you said that when the frog saw you it hid in the bush

    flynn

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  5. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 10:54 AM

    Dear Jack
    I liked your writing it was very intresting.my favourie part about it was when you stole the teachers fry pan
    Sophie

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  6. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 10:55 AM

    Hi Jack
    I loved the way that you said that "they cauught me and abolished me". I like your story too.
    Why did you say "they had bought a frog while I was gone ?

    from Angus

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  7. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 10:58 AM

    hi jack i really like how you said that when the frog saw you it hid in the bush

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  8. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 11:02 AM

    hi jack thats a really good story eneyway i want to know where you geat so geat ideaers if that was real ill be shooch.

    from daniel

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  9. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 11:03 AM

    hi jack i really like how you said when the frog saw you it hid in the bush

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  10. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 11:07 AM

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  11. AnonymousJune 6, 2013 at 10:50 AM

    Hi Jack it was good

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  12. AnonymousJune 6, 2013 at 10:55 AM

    Hi Jack I really liked it

    From Connor

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  13. Ruma KakapoJuly 10, 2013 at 2:35 PM

    hi jack I really like it.

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