Once upon a time there were two sisters, one kitten, a puppy and a bunny. They also had a two storey house.
So I think you would like to know the sisters names. Well they were called Milly and Molly. Milly has no pets.The awesome thing was that the next day was christmas day. They were so excited. Milly was wishing that she would get her own bunny.
And Molly was wishing that she would get a puppy but they would have liked a kitten more. But they couldn't have one because they already had a kitten so it was time to go to bed. So they were sleeping and sleeping until it was morning. They woke up.
They came down the stairs and went into the living room. And they saw presents everywhere around the Chirstmas tree. They went into mum and dads bedroom. They were so happy. So they went outside. They found two cages there milly found a bunny.
So she opened the cage and the bunny ran into milly's arms and snagled up. Then they went to the next cage molly found a puppy then she opened it up the puppy ran into her arms.
Then they went inside to open the other presents. That was the best Christmas ever they said.
What was your favourite christmas like ?
Hi Sophie
ReplyDeleteSounds amazing. I wish I could do what you do on christmas. We go to the church instead.
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Cameron.M/Mark.B
Hi Cameron and Mark
DeleteThanks for the awesome comment.
Is it fun at church?
What has been your present and christmas?
To Sophie
ReplyDeleteVery good story. I liked your question at the end of your story. We like Christmas sooooo much, because we get lots of presents.
Kane.H and Alex.T
Weston Park Primary School
To Sophie
ReplyDeleteVery good story. I liked your question at the end of your story. We like Christmas sooooo much, because we get lots of presents.
Kane.H and Alex.T
Weston Park Primary School
Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeletePets and Christmas sounds amazing. Is it a story? Well done!
By Mia Jasmine.
Hi, thanks for the comment.
DeleteOut of all of your christmas's what has been your favouritee present?
Sophie
Hi i like pets and chrismas aswell because ive got a dog called Teddy and i got him for chrismas and my friend Ryan has 2 cats but he got one for chrismas called Mitzy and the other one I got from someone that didnt want him and his name is Tinkey.Mickey.J and Ryan.T
ReplyDeleteGreat story Sophie. It was well thought out. Our favorite christmas was when we got together with our family. Maybe next time you can use different openers.
ReplyDeleteBy:Olivia and Maya
My favorite present was a ps3 and the games that came with it. I liked last christmas besause I got what I wanted on my list and extra.
ReplyDeleteAshley 4.1
West Thornton
Hi I love pets they are very talintid they are call i rearly want one i love the bird picher i love it.
ReplyDeleteRosie & Finlay